No real effort put in ?
Doesn't seem like you put any effort into the animation part and the music is really screechy. Had to watch clip several times to read the text because it played to fast.
Worst part was there was no action script to stop the animation from looping for ever and no play button on the pre loader
since this is your first animation I hope you take my critic and improve your next animation.
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